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He stood alone on the cliff that over looked the water, the wind blowing through his hair, the wind also blew his long coat, making the leather of it rustle together.  

The leaves shook from the winds currents. He stood there wondering why, why did he have to suffer so, the betrayal of his friends, the rejections from his peers the suffering from being alone, the pain of being left behind, and the emptiness he carried with him everywhere.  

He looked out at the ocean and then to the skies above and screamed at them," WHY, WHY DO YOU PUT ME THROUGH THIS WHY WON'T YOU LET ME DIE!" he lowered his head towards the ground," why do i have to suffer when there is nothing here for me?" he stood there and sobbed for a minute then turned around walking past the tree, he stopped for a second and looked at the tree," why especially did you have to leave me...?"  

He continued down the hill from the cliff with the tree along his lonely road for all eternity.
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just a short story of sorts that popped into my head

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wow~
very emotional.

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You can kiss your family and friends good-bye and put miles between you, but at the same time you carry them with you in your heart, your mind, your stomach, because you do not just live in a world but a world lives in you.
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Nice story. I like it :)
It's intense, and makes me a bit sad^^
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thanks...

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When will Aramgedon start you ask. It starts when I push the little RED BUTTON
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Ooo! I like! Don't you love when you get random inspiration like that?

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Don't worry, this looks legit.
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somewhat but it was more of a depression thought

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When will Aramgedon start you ask. It starts when I push the little RED BUTTON
:iconlocationtemptation:
Well, those are helpful, too! XD

Very well written! Bravo!

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Don't worry, this looks legit.
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...thasnks....

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When will Aramgedon start you ask. It starts when I push the little RED BUTTON

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